Defiant of an Alchemist

[Keiko]

I don't know...I'm pretty skeptical at making this video series. I have a few reasons why...

1. My plot line seems kinda stupid.
2. It'll take a lot of time to finish this story.
3. I don't think it'll take off.

If reason 3 is true, I will not make/discontinue it. This is here because the flamers of the OGP forums might point and laugh at what I've got for a story. Here's what I've got planned...

Synopsis: AXIS has plans to kidnap the "Alchemist Princess" to take over the city. She is trying to stop AXIS' plans, while avoiding attention. She's accompanied by a single guard: Nekomata, a Soul Fighter.

Characters

"Ketsu" (not real name) [MY ROLE!] - The Alchemist Princess. She's being pursued by AXIS for a reason she doesn't know.
Nekomata [Taken by friend.] - The princess' guard. He swore to protect the princess until the day he will die. (Should have Blade Spirit)

AXIS
Enkon [Spritle] - Leader of AXIS. Pursues to capture Ketsu for her power. Said to be somewhat of a pervert.
Members
Akari [Taken by friend.] - Sold-out Alchemist [female]
Seihou - The stealthy Elementalist of AXIS. (should have some ice exo [female])
Utsuro - Clumsy member, probably for comic relief. (CANNOT BE ALCHEMIST [male])
Iken [AshuraNiwa] - Striker, right hand man to Enkon (should have striker clothing [male])
Tsutoni [d3m0n1c1] - Typical AXIS member. (any class [male])

I MAY ADD SIDE CHARACTERS. However, these side characters MAY become Mainstream characters.
Possible side actors...
gnomes
Komos

Discuss.

[Gnomes]

i might join for a role but only problem will b the stages theres not really any kingdom looking ones unless its oriental.

[Keiko]

Well, the thing is, she's dubbed a princess. It's not a literal one.

[Gnomes]

that changes everything. if you ever do this i might be in the axis

[Shoe]

I wants to be teh soulfighter! =3

[Keiko]

YARGH I forgot to specify more stuff X[

[Blueblur]

Ahaha, can i be enkon?

[Keiko]

Sure! Spot's for you! :D

[Blueblur]

Sure! Spot's for you! :D


w00t! I love you keiko <3!

[Gnomes]

maybe you can add a skilled mercenary charecter thats hired by the
Axis later on in the series to capture the princess id be that one. and i could also be the comic relief guy with my disco look.

[Keiko]

Ah, you'd wanna be Utsuro eh? You got it.

[Gnomes]

although you said utsuro cant be an alchemist i am an alchemist

[Keiko]

Oh right. *head hurts* I'm not thinking straight @_@

[Shoe]

o wait, the soulfighter needs blade spirit? Count me out (///_-)

[Gnomes]

we could do this in gemmuch more maps but that means you need to lvl up your charecters and get your looks again. unless we get on the public accounts but it will be impossible with dc. we really need to find out away to change the pw on those accounts. only way to see the newpw would be to find your way here and make an account. that also reminds me why not make an area only viewable by members

[Keiko]

Well, for the Nekomata position, I noted I was gonna ask a friend if he wanted to take that part. I was able to have outside RF contact and he said yes.

[SilentZen]

wow hearing u guys and girls talk about gem makes me jealous i tried to make one then i got confused

[Llami]

I for one
vote that llami should be a role
yes
indeed
quite
this is the truth
yup yup
As in that would be a great idea
yah

Though honestly come on!
I have a "dark" side and a "light" side
and who doesn't love an over sized gun? huh? HUH?!

[Gnomes]

i have another charecter i can be. How about a general that has an army of robots. He can battle the soul fighter and the alchemist princess. He could like send hordes of robots and also after all his robots are defeated he challenges the soulfighter too a 1 vs 1 with his giant gun. Only problem is the robots might wanna wait till the laser and missle robot exos come out

[Mosley]

I have a little problem with your story. It contains a Mary-Sue.

This is a "perfect" female character, usually (as in this case) a self insert, as the main character.

Mary Sue - Encyclopedia Dramatica (http://encyclopediadramatica.com/Mary_sue)

Although this tends to be a flaw with almost all fanfictions, I trust that you'll be able to write some more interesting backstories then you see in most stories like this.

So you're planning on 'filming' this in game? Will you use voice actors or just subtitle it?

[Keiko]

I'd say there's more but I'd be giving away too much :)

(And yes it'll be an in-game filming.)

[AshuraNiwa]

I WANT TA BE IKEN.

sounds like a total badass. :cool:

[Komos]

Heh, I'll be a char. Make one up or give meh one, but I'd prefer if you went with my elem look or my Alch look. Please =D

[KruSuPhy]

o-o
Tsutoni = I call it

[Llami]

ahhhh~
Llami gets no spot?
Llami sad D:

[Keiko]

I'm still trying to flesh out my story D: I'll tell you if there be a spot open.