Rate it plz 10 being best

[SilentZen]

The Will of Fire
The will of fire, the burning flame in our souls
How far are you willing to go to what must be done?
How far are you willing to go to achieve what you want?
How far are you willing to go before you give up?
The will of fire is in us all....
How much though is the question
Some have sparks other an inferno
The will of fire determines our bravery
It guides us through the darkest of times
It.......It gives us HOPE!!!!!!
Only you can turn up the heat.......
Only you can control your will of fire

[Feuerrader]

Poem: In its broadest sense, a composition utilizing rhyme, meter, concrete detail, and expressive language to create a literary experience with emotional and aesthetic appeal. Typical poems include sonnets, odes, elegies, haiku, ballads, and free verse.

I'll just leave this here...

[SilentZen]

I'll just leave this here...
so uh your rating plz?? and is that a good thing???

[Marrow]

I don't know much about writing poetry or rating poetry, and I don't like poetry in general that much. So I'll just give it a 7 maybe?

[Mosley]

I agree with Feu. This seems like it would work better as a power metal song then a poem.

The will of fire is in us all!
Only YOU.

CAN TURN UP THE HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAST
*guitar solo*

[SilentZen]

I agree with Feu. This seems like it would work better as a power metal song then a poem.

The will of fire is in us all!
Only YOU.

CAN TURN UP THE HEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAST
*guitar solo*

lol i just need ratings i guess

[skayte]

I'm now searching up Dragonforce on youtube.

7/10

[Mosley]

6 as a poem

11 as a power metal song

[McGerkey]

Holy shit this is awful.

-899898/10

[McGerkey]

The Billy King (9:22:36 PM): The will of fire, the burning flame in our souls
How far are you willing to go to what must be done?
How far are you willing to go to achieve what you want?
How far are you willing to go before you give up?
The will of fire is in us all....
How much though is the question
Some have sparks other an inferno
The will of fire determines our bravery
It guides us through the darkest of times
It.......It gives us HOPE!!!!!!
Only you can turn up the heat.......
Only you can control your will of fire
The Billy King (9:22:58 PM): Print this out and like keep it in your pocket when you go to Iraq
The Billy King (9:23:12 PM): And recite it to yourself whenever you go InTO BATTle
VicksVapoRub32b (9:23:36 PM): lololololo
The Billy King (9:24:06 PM): BEST POEM EVER, MIRITE?
VicksVapoRub32b (9:24:11 PM): no