1 New poem rate it plz

[SilentZen]

The Full Blossom of Spring
Spring....A time of renewal
a time when things blossom
a time of peace and hope
It's when people start anew
It's the time of renewal
A chance to start out fresh
Let the rain of the spring
wash away your fears and fustration
With nothing to fear
let your body soar through the blue sky
Forget about the pain of yesterday
Smile.smile and break through the sky of grey
Far from the sunny days that lie in sleep
wait...wait with patience
Once it's spring again it's time
time for you to blossom

[McGerkey]

renewal
anew
renewal


Hahaha.

[Mosley]

A lot better then your first poem.

To be honest you might want to stick to prose.

[SilentZen]

A lot better then your first poem.

To be honest you might want to stick to prose.

Prose???

[Mosley]

Prose - Writing or speaking in the usual or ordinary form. Prose becomes poetic when it takes on rhythm and rhyme.

Poetry is hard shit.